*because im utterly incapable of reading it again
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there arent work hours and you arent getting paid. im also not getting paid but im incompetent so you need to do my job. This is an american predatory company if Iāve seen one
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feeling like your writing is cringe isnt exactly atypical, and doesnāt really mean much for the work until you get a good feeling for it
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Trueā¦
yeah i know lol
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making sure
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thanks for reminder tho. helpful
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Really dumb question: is Cara triggering a crisis of faith, or is she helping Esther work through a crisis of faith?
Asking because I thought it was the latter, but I think youāre going for the former.
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yes?
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iād say that she likes, intensifies it and makes it an Active Problem
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and also helps her work through it
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turns it into a crisis of faith rather than just doubts n all that
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thatās how itās looking rn tho
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i wanted to capture the moment where the illusion is shattered in the scene there. the point of no return
i know i had doubts before i had that but i was able to cover them up ~relatively well and rationalize them.
i didnāt have a Grand moment but when i read the top honch of the cuhrch say the āfamily proclamationā (homophobia document) was explicitly intended to remove trans rights (which runs contrary to all of the justifications that were given) i knew i couldnāt stay
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Gotcha.
Reason Iām asking is because itās really hard to go from zero to hundred on a crisis of faith, so it might help to start with Esther already questioning her faith and Cara giving her the courage to really face it head on.
Thinking out loud here; disregard as much of it as you want.
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GUYS GUYS
GO TO PAGE 88 AND TELL ME WHICH OF YOUR FAVS GOT ON THE PARASOCIAL INFLUENCER LIST
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yeah iāve been trying to sneak that in
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MARKIPLIER TIMES FIVE
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